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The Man with the Veal Medallions
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COMMENT 215018
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2011-09-17 10:03 AM |
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My kindom for a paragraph. Please hit the return button every now and then. If you're not sure when to break a paragraph, guess.
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SHOREBIRD
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2011-09-17 10:31 AM |
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-028 You are right. My attention span is good for 5-6 lines. After that I move on.
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COMMENT 215059
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2011-09-17 12:49 PM |
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Then stick to tweets and ignore the literature!
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SHOREBIRD
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2011-09-17 02:13 PM |
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Real literature includes logical paragraphs.
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COMMENT 215288
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2011-09-18 03:38 PM |
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Content without form is in need of severe editing. But hey---you gets what you pay for in this.
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